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¿µ¾î °øºÎ¸¦ Çϸ鼭 ÅäÀÍ Á¡¼ö´Â 700Á¡ Á¤µµ±îÁö ¿Ã¶úÁö¸¸, 

Á¤ÀÛ ¿µ¾î·Î ¸»ÇÏ´Â °ÍÀÌ ³Ê¹« ¾î·Á¿ü¾î¿ä.

¹®¹ýÀ̳ª µ¶ÇØ´Â ¾î´À Á¤µµ ÀڽŠÀÖ¾úÁö¸¸, 

ȸȭ¸¦ ÇÏ·Á¸é ¸Ó¸´¼ÓÀÌ ÇϾêÁö°í ´Ü¾îÁ¶Â÷ ¶°¿À¸£Áö ¾Ê¾ÒÁÒ.

±×·¡¼­ Àú´Â ȸȭ ½Ç·ÂÀ» Ű¿ì±â À§ÇØ 

È­»ó¿µ¾î¸¦ ½ÃÀÛÇß½À´Ï´Ù!

ÅäÀÍ 700Á¡ÀÌ¸é ¿µ¾î ½Ç·ÂÀÌ ¾î´À Á¤µµ ÀÖ´Ù°í »ý°¢Çß¾î¿ä. 

ÇÏÁö¸¸ ´ëÈ­¸¦ ½ÃµµÇغ¸´Ï, ÀüÇô ¸»ÀÌ ¾È ³ª¿À´Â °Å¿¹¿ä! 

"¾î.. ±×.. ÀÖÀݾÆ.."

"¹¹¶ó°í ÇØ¾ß ÇÏÁö?"

"ÀÔ ¹ÛÀ¸·Î ¾È ³ª¿Í!"

ÀÌ·± °æÇèÀ» ¸î ¹ø ÇÏ°í ³ª´Ï, 

¿µ¾î ¼É Á¡¼ö¿Í ȸȭ´Â ¿ÏÀüÈ÷ ´Ù¸£±¸³ª! ¶ó°í »ý°¢ÀÌ µé¾ú¾î¿ä

 

È­»ó¿µ¾î´Â Á÷Á¢ ´ëÈ­Çϸ鼭 ½ÇÀüÀ¸·Î ÀÍÈú ¼ö ÀÖ°í,

¹®¹ýÀûÀ¸·Î Ʋ¸° Ç¥ÇöÀ» ¹Ù·Î¹Ù·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ¸ç,

³»°¡ ¸»ÇÏ´Â ¼Óµµ¿Í ¹ßÀ½µµ 

Á¡Á¡ ÀÚ¿¬½º·¯¿öÁø´Ù´Â ´À³¦ÀÌ µé¾ú¾î¿ä

 

ÇÑ ¹ø¿¡ ¿Ïº®ÇÑ ¹®ÀåÀ» ¸»ÇÏ·Á ÇÏÁö ¾Ê°í, 

°£´ÜÇÑ ¹®ÀåºÎÅÍ ÁÖ°í¹Þ°í ¿¬½ÀÇß¾î¿ä

Ãʹݿ¡´Â "Ʋ¸®¸é ¾î¶±ÇÏÁö?" ÇÏ´Â »ý°¢ÀÌ °­Çß¾î¿ä.

ÇÏÁö¸¸ ¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ °íÃÄÁÖ°í, ÀÚ¿¬½º·´°Ô ´Ù½Ã ¸»ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖµµ·Ï µµ¿ÍÁá¾î¿ä.

 

ÅäÀÍ °øºÎ¸¦ ÇÒ ¶§´Â ¾î·Á¿î ´Ü¾î¿Í ¹®ÀåÀ» ¿Ü¿üÁö¸¸, 

Á¤ÀÛ ½Ç»ýȰ¿¡¼­´Â °ÅÀÇ ¾²Áö ¾Ê´Â °æ¿ì°¡ ¸¹¾Ò¾î¿ä.

½ÇÁ¦·Î  ´ëÈ­ÇÒ ¶§ º¹ÀâÇÑ ¹®ÀåÀÌ ¾Æ´Ï¶ó, 

°£´ÜÇϰí ÀÚ¿¬½º·¯¿î ¹®ÀåÀÌ ´õ Áß¿äÇÏ´Ù´Â °É ¾Ë¾Ò¾î¿ä.

 

ª´õ¶óµµ ¸ÅÀÏ ¸»ÇÏ´Â ½À°üÀ» µéÀÌ´Â °Ô Áß¿äÇß¾î¿ä.

¹è¿î Ç¥ÇöÀ» ³» °ÍÀ¸·Î ¸¸µé±â À§ÇØ ¿µ¾î Àϱ⸦ ¾²¸é¼­ º¹½ÀÇß¾î¿ä.

¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ ±³Á¤ÇØÁØ Ç¥ÇöÀ» ´Ù½Ã Çѹø Á¤¸®Çϸé, ½Ç·ÂÀÌ ÈξÀ ºü¸£°Ô ´Ã¾î¿ä.

 

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I started taking online English lessons because I wanted to improve my speaking skills. Even though I got a TOEIC score of 700, I realized that I couldn¡¯t speak English fluently. At first, I was very nervous and couldn¡¯t even say a full sentence.

However, my teacher encouraged me and corrected my mistakes. She often told me, "Don't be afraid to make mistakes!" That gave me confidence to keep speaking.

 

I noticed some improvements. I could express my thoughts more easily, and I didn¡¯t feel as nervous as before. Also, I learned many useful expressions that I can use in real-life conversations.

Now, I enjoy speaking English more than before. I still make mistakes, but I know that practice is the key to improvement. I will continue learning and speaking every day! 

 

 

³ª´Â ¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱ⠽ǷÂÀ» Çâ»ó½ÃŰ°í ½Í¾î¼­ È­»ó¿µ¾î¸¦ ½ÃÀÛÇß´Ù. ÅäÀÍ 700Á¡À» ¹Þ¾ÒÁö¸¸, Á¤ÀÛ ¿µ¾î¸¦ À¯Ã¢ÇÏ°Ô ¸»ÇÏÁö ¸øÇÑ´Ù´Â °ÍÀ» ±ú´Þ¾Ò´Ù. óÀ½¿¡´Â ³Ê¹« ±äÀåÇØ¼­ ÇÑ ¹®Àåµµ Á¦´ë·Î ¸»Çϱ⠾î·Á¿ü´Ù.

ÇÏÁö¸¸ ¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ ½Ç¼ö¸¦ ±³Á¤ÇØ ÁÖ¾ú°í, ³ª¿¡°Ô ÀÌ·¸°Ô ¸»Çß´Ù.

"Ʋ¸®´Â °É µÎ·Á¿öÇÏÁö ¸¶¼¼¿ä!"

ÀÌ ¸»À» µè°í ÀڽۨÀ» ¾ò¾î¼­ °è¼Ó ¿µ¾î·Î ¸»ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ¾ú´Ù.

 

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Áö±ÝÀº ¿µ¾î ¸»ÇϱⰡ ¿¹Àüº¸´Ù ÈξÀ Àç¹ÌÀÖ¾îÁ³´Ù. ¿©ÀüÈ÷ ½Ç¼ö¸¦ ÇÏÁö¸¸, ¿¬½ÀÀÌ °¡Àå Áß¿äÇÏ´Ù´Â °É ¾Ë°Ô µÇ¾ú´Ù. ³ª´Â ¾ÕÀ¸·Îµµ °è¼Ó ¿µ¾î¸¦ ¹è¿ì°í ¸ÅÀÏ ¿¬½ÀÇÒ °ÍÀÌ´Ù! 

 

 



 
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