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    ¿¹¸¦ µé¾î, IELTS Writing Task ¹®Á¦¸¦ ÇÔ²² Åä·ÐÇϸ鼭 ½ºÇÇÅ·, ¶óÀÌÆà Á¡¼öµµ ¸¹ÀÌ ¿Ã¶ú½À´Ï´Ù

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    "Nowadays, many people believe that technology makes life easier, while others think it has made life more complicated. In my opinion, technology has both positive and negative effects on our lives."

     

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    "both positive and negative effects"¶ó´Â Ç¥ÇöÀÌ ³Ê¹« ±¤¹üÀ§ÇÔ

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    "In the modern world, technology has revolutionized the way we live. While some argue that it complicates our daily lives, I firmly believe that its advantages outweigh its drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss how technology enhances convenience and efficiency despite some minor challenges."

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