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"Nowadays, many people believe that technology makes life easier, while others think it has made life more complicated. In my opinion, technology has both positive and negative effects on our lives."
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"In the modern world, technology has revolutionized the way we live. While some argue that it complicates our daily lives, I firmly believe that its advantages outweigh its drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss how technology enhances convenience and efficiency despite some minor challenges."
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