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I started taking online English lessons because I wanted to improve my speaking skills. Even though I got a TOEIC score of 700, I realized that I couldn¡¯t speak English fluently. At first, I was very nervous and couldn¡¯t even say a full sentence.
However, my teacher encouraged me and corrected my mistakes. She often told me, "Don't be afraid to make mistakes!" That gave me confidence to keep speaking.
I noticed some improvements. I could express my thoughts more easily, and I didn¡¯t feel as nervous as before. Also, I learned many useful expressions that I can use in real-life conversations.
Now, I enjoy speaking English more than before. I still make mistakes, but I know that practice is the key to improvement. I will continue learning and speaking every day!
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